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First page rough by lonelion4ever First page rough by lonelion4ever
So this is the first rough of page 1 of my comic Korheim. Honestly I'm scared as hell of how it will do when I really get further into it. So please I'd love some very real feed back. No dialogue bubbles or anything are in it yet. but I'm looking for comments on the flow of it, is it even starting to resemble something that might catch your eye and make you turn the page again sort of thoughts too. anyways let me know before i get too far into inking lol.
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Krevven Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks great! Funny too. Good Anatomy on the character, consistant proportions, plus she looks cute. Nice job!
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lonelion4ever Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks =D gonna add some color later tomorrow probably, then really get to work with the rest.
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Krevven Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I look forward to it. Really wish I could get my head back in the game and start drawing again but everytime I look at a blank paper my mind instantly derps
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lonelion4ever Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ya I get that plenty of times. Usually thats when I put on music from a movie or games, or hit up netflix for "inspiration", or even go looking at a lot of other peoples work. That will tend to get me exciting and want to put something, anything down on paper.
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Krevven Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll give those suggestions a try, thanks!
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